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October 17, 2004

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Gabriel Cruz

This is a very good blog. The reader can plainly see that your community was well thought out and organized according to the ideals you wanted to build your community around. The description of the map makes it very clear why each and every part of the town is there and why it is located where it is. Really the only change I could think of that might improve the post would be changing some words. The word town is used a lot and makes a repetitive feeling in the post. Using words like community and settlement would make it easier for the reader. All and all a very strong blog post.

Kamal Patel

The town created is very good. It includes everything that its residents could need, and as you said, is a self sufficient society. This creates a separate 'world' where former slaves would not ever have to deal with slave owners and slavery, because they would never ever have to leave the town. And that would allow their children to grow up free as well. Even the title is clever, Liberty Farms. There were very few things I could find wrong in this post. There was one sentence where you repeated yourself, "The center of town had beautiful gardens in the center of town", but other than that, I couldn't find any real grammatical or structural errors. Very well organized and thought out. Excellent work.

Justin Piteleski

Jessica, quality work. I really like how you focus on the impact of African American's in your post. For next time, just bold your thesis, and watch your sentence structure. However really good work on your post.

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